From: "Steven R" <steven@iinet.net.au>
To: <ml@qoole.com>
Reply-To: ml@qoole.com
Date: Sun, 4 Jan 1998 15:24:34 +0800
Subject: Re: Will someone PLEASE check out my TF map!?

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TO Doug,

I downloaded and had a look at your team fortress map. It looks good, =
but here are a few things that I found could be improved when I played =
over my network :=20

1) It is a bit small, with more than 3 or 4 players it would be very =
crowded.
2) Add some more color, it looks a bit dull.
3) The water tunnels under the level should not lead to the other team's =
spawn area, an engineer could easily build a sentury in there and the =
other team would be history, or it is an easy camping spot ( too easy ).

hope this has been helpful criticism.

My next TF map should be available soon, so u will be able to criticize =
me.

{CMAM} Q
Steven R
-----Original Message-----
    From: Brian or Doug <mystic@niagara.com>
    To: ml@qoole.com <ml@qoole.com>
    Date: Sunday, January 04, 1998 9:50 AM
    Subject: Will someone PLEASE check out my TF map!?
   =20
   =20
    Will someone please check out my TF map? I worked hard on it!=20
    http://gaming-central.home.ml.org/2base4.zip=20
    it's the 4th version of it (I've vised it about 20 times unhappy =
with the way something worked and I'm almost positave theres no bugs.)=20
    thanks.=20
    Doug=20

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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>TO Doug,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I downloaded and had a look at your team fortress =
map. It=20
looks good, but here are a few things that I found could be improved =
when <FONT=20
color=3D#000000>I </FONT>played over my network : </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>1) It is a bit small, with more than 3 or 4 players =
it would=20
be very <FONT color=3D#000000>crowded</FONT>.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>2) Add some more color, it looks a bit=20
dull.</FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>3) The water tunnels under the level should not lead =
to the=20
other team's spawn area, an engineer could easily build a sentury in =
there and=20
the other team would be history, or it is an easy camping spot ( too =
easy=20
).</FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>hope this has been <FONT color=3D#000000>helpful=20
</FONT>criticism.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>My next TF map should be <FONT =
color=3D#000000>available=20
</FONT>soon, so u will be able to criticize me.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>{CMAM} Q</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Steven R</FONT>&nbsp;</DIV>
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    <DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
Message-----</B><BR><B>From:=20
    </B>Brian or Doug &lt;<A=20
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href=3D"mailto:mystic@niagara.com">mystic@niagara.com</A>&gt;<BR><B>To: =
</B><A=20
    href=3D"mailto:ml@qoole.com">ml@qoole.com</A> &lt;<A=20
    href=3D"mailto:ml@qoole.com">ml@qoole.com</A>&gt;<BR><B>Date: =
</B>Sunday,=20
    January 04, 1998 9:50 AM<BR><B>Subject: </B>Will someone PLEASE =
check out my=20
    TF map!?<BR><BR></DIV></FONT>Will <U>someone</U> please check out my =
TF map?=20
    I worked hard on it! <BR><A=20
    =
href=3D"http://gaming-central.home.ml.org/2base4.zip">http://gaming-centr=
al.home.ml.org/2base4.zip</A>=20
    <BR>it's the 4th version of it (I've vised it about 20 times unhappy =
with=20
    the way something worked and I'm almost positave theres no bugs.)=20
    <BR>thanks. <BR>Doug </BLOCKQUOTE></BODY></HTML>

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